Scene Heart

Bitch, this be stylin'!
LOL What can I say to this that'll make me sound like a legit critic?
Well I really like the line art in itself. I snuck over to the owner's page and looked at it. The color seems to bring it a lot more life. It's adorable, really! c:
It doesn't bother me that their bodies are cut off, because most of my drawings don't go below the belt either, but a background would've been really nice. I mostly say this because the rehead looks a bit on the pale side, and something behind them would've made him look not as ghostly.
Then again those might have been your intentions. Just as long as he doesn't start sparkling in the sunlight, it's okay with me.
The colors are nice, the first thing that drew my attention was their eyes. They shine a little more than the rest.
The detail in the line art is really good, too. My favorite part out of the whole picture has to be their hands.
Actually it's their nails. I be jelly.
And I want that bracelet. Such a pretty color.

The thing I see that I like the most is that it looks like you took your time. No stray color as far as I can see (I should probably put on my glasses) and the two seem to contrast. Brighter colors like red and green (Christmas?) clash with the darker ones like purple and black. Shading in the future would be beautiful.

All in all, I'm going to end my foolish and probably redundant ramble and tell you that I like it a whole freaking lot.